I don't normally read WIP, and this is a good example of why. I need more. That definitely needs to be published, either at FFN or AO3 or both.
I'm not too proud to resort to begging... More, please! "The world was on fire and no one could save me but you. It's strange what desire will make foolish people do. I never dreamed that I'd meet somebody like you."
Pretty awesome so far. Interesting plot, well-written, fitting character portrayals, Tamsin. Formula for a fun, awesome, valkubusy time. You should definitely post it somewhere. No question about it. "Why do you care so much!?"
This next installment is going to be my reward when I get all of that done. biggrin Can't wait to see what happens next!
I hope you like it! The story takes kind of a surprising twist. lol I added a few extra character beats...especially between Tamsin and Kenzi... and yes, Valkubus moments too, in order to soften the blow for what happens in chapter 20. "And I wonder...can you really know yourself without memory? I mean, can you really know what you want?" - Bo Dennis, "Of All the Gin Joints"
I can totally relate. I have to come up with two demo graphics tonight and do some major CSS revisions on another website by Saturday. And I have to update a gallery on another and populate a store on yet another.
And yet I find myself writing more of Chapter 22, which I'm seriously considering breaking down into pieces because it's getting kind of long. lol
I also might have to release a couple of chapters tomorrow, rather than 5 because if I post through chapter 20 and then not update for a few days, you all will totally kill me. #getthekleenex
So I think I'll do 16-17 tomorrow instead so I can ensure my continuing existence because things don't get super angsty until starting in 18. So whew. "And I wonder...can you really know yourself without memory? I mean, can you really know what you want?" - Bo Dennis, "Of All the Gin Joints"