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ZoriahDate: Tuesday, 19 Nov 13, 5:56 PM | Message # 46
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Mmm, yes, that part was especially delicious. Good job! Definitely can't wait to read more and see what happens. tongue
 
CherriiDate: Tuesday, 19 Nov 13, 8:58 PM | Message # 47
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I don't normally read WIP, and this is a good example of why. I need more. That definitely needs to be published, either at FFN or AO3 or both.

I'm not too proud to resort to begging... More, please! smile


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It's strange what desire will make foolish people do.
I never dreamed that I'd meet somebody like you."
 
Fangirl-outletDate: Wednesday, 20 Nov 13, 0:38 AM | Message # 48
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Pretty awesome so far. Interesting plot, well-written, fitting character portrayals, Tamsin. Formula for a fun, awesome, valkubusy time. You should definitely post it somewhere. No question about it. smile

"Why do you care so much!?"
 
UberFaenaticDate: Wednesday, 20 Nov 13, 3:33 PM | Message # 49
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Thank you all for your encouragement. smile I hope to finish the last chapter in the next couple days or so but I have some clients who need their websites pronto! biggrin

Plus, Tamsin is a stubborn chica, making the wrap a bit angsty to say the least!

http://creativegeek.us/lostgir....-10.rtf


"And I wonder...can you really know yourself without memory? I mean, can you really know what you want?" - Bo Dennis, "Of All the Gin Joints"

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ZoriahDate: Wednesday, 20 Nov 13, 7:18 PM | Message # 50
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I have a huge load of dish-washing and laundry to do, plus tidying two rooms as I have a BFF coming over later tonight and guess what....

This next installment is going to be my reward when I get all of that done.  biggrin Can't wait to see what happens next!
 
Eternal-DustDate: Wednesday, 20 Nov 13, 8:50 PM | Message # 51
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MOAR  chew

Bo: "I'm alright, but I'm not perfect."
Tamsin: "Yes, you are. To me, you are."
 
UberFaenaticDate: Wednesday, 20 Nov 13, 9:29 PM | Message # 52
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Quote Zoriah ()
This next installment is going to be my reward when I get all of that done. biggrin Can't wait to see what happens next!
I hope you like it!  The story takes kind of a surprising twist.  lol  I added a few extra character beats...especially between Tamsin and Kenzi... and yes, Valkubus moments too, in order to soften the blow for what happens in chapter 20. wink


"And I wonder...can you really know yourself without memory? I mean, can you really know what you want?" - Bo Dennis, "Of All the Gin Joints"
 
ValkyrieLiquorCabinetDate: Thursday, 21 Nov 13, 3:26 AM | Message # 53
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Love the story very much MOAARRR
 
UberFaenaticDate: Thursday, 21 Nov 13, 4:59 PM | Message # 54
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Thank you all! smile Valkubus enters in this section.  Plus some fun Kenzi/Tamsin moments because reasons. wink

http://creativegeek.us/lostgir....-15.rtf


"And I wonder...can you really know yourself without memory? I mean, can you really know what you want?" - Bo Dennis, "Of All the Gin Joints"
 
Eternal-DustDate: Thursday, 21 Nov 13, 5:35 PM | Message # 55
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Yes!! Thank you thank you! I was dying of boredom at work biggrin

Bo: "I'm alright, but I'm not perfect."
Tamsin: "Yes, you are. To me, you are."
 
Fangirl-outletDate: Thursday, 21 Nov 13, 9:17 PM | Message # 56
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Quote Eternal-Dust ()
Yes!! Thank you thank you! I was dying of boredom at work
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"Why do you care so much!?"
 
UberFaenaticDate: Thursday, 21 Nov 13, 10:56 PM | Message # 57
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Quote Fangirl-outlet ()
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There's a story here. I can feels it.


"And I wonder...can you really know yourself without memory? I mean, can you really know what you want?" - Bo Dennis, "Of All the Gin Joints"
 
Fangirl-outletDate: Thursday, 21 Nov 13, 11:00 PM | Message # 58
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Quote UberFaenatic ()
There's a story here. I can feels it.
Boredom --> Doing everything BUT homework and writing. This chick. 

Though her being entertained isn't necessarily a bad thing, so congratulations. :P


"Why do you care so much!?"
 
UberFaenaticDate: Friday, 22 Nov 13, 0:23 AM | Message # 59
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I can totally relate.  I have to come up with two demo graphics tonight and do some major CSS revisions on another website by Saturday.  And I have to update a gallery on another and populate a store on yet another. 

And yet I find myself writing more of Chapter 22, which I'm seriously considering breaking down into pieces because it's getting kind of long. lol

I also might have to release a couple of chapters tomorrow, rather than 5 because if I post through chapter 20 and then not update for a few days, you all will totally kill me.  #getthekleenex 

So I think I'll do 16-17 tomorrow instead so I can ensure my continuing existence because things don't get super angsty until starting in 18.  So whew. wink


"And I wonder...can you really know yourself without memory? I mean, can you really know what you want?" - Bo Dennis, "Of All the Gin Joints"
 
Eternal-DustDate: Friday, 22 Nov 13, 1:07 AM | Message # 60
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Quote Fangirl-outlet ()
Boredom --> Doing everything BUT homework and writing. This chick.
 
Because who wants to do any of that when they can read fanfic? biggrin

Quote UberFaenatic ()
I also might have to release a couple of chapters tomorrow, rather than 5 because if I post through chapter 20 and then not update for a few days, you all will totally kill me.  #getthekleenex
 
You also have my support in writing a sequel. Jussayin  eyebrow


Bo: "I'm alright, but I'm not perfect."
Tamsin: "Yes, you are. To me, you are."
 
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